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0 posted 2001-09-08 06:05 PM




In The Space Between
By: Noah Eaton
8/29/01

This will all come to pass
It has to be true
We're getting closer every day
Both of us will pull through
And all those broken days of youth
We can never change

I've always felt pushed in
To the corner of my prison
And I can't replace
All the days that have come to waste
All the dreams that have come to fade
But I'm praying for us both, my love

It won't be the last heart you break
It won't be the last tear you cry
Only time can decide when love will be yours and mine
When the distance thins in the space between you and I

We all make mistakes
Though it's never our piece of cake
There has to be something more
Dreamings my only valuable resource
I can't help but mourn

If I will ever get to hold you anytime soon
I've went so far to try and whistle
But I lose my nerve to stay in tune
But I'm praying for us both, my love

It won't be the last heart you break
It won't be the last tear you cry
Only time can decide when love will be yours and mine
When the distance thins in the space between you and I

I feel so ashamed
And I feel all this pain
If I will ever hold you in my life
And between you and me
Will we ever see
A happy lovely life...
A happy life...

Count your many blessings
Hold onto them all while you can
This all will come to pass
And all those broken days of youth
We can never change

And It won't be the last heart you break
It won't be the last tear you cry
Only time can decide when love will be yours and mine
When the distance thins in the space between you and I
It won't be the last heart you break
It won't be the last tear you cry
Only time can decide when love will be yours and mine
When the distance thins in the space between you and I

In the space between you and I...
The space between...our hearts

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1 posted 2001-09-08 10:39 PM


For sure it won't be the last tear you cry, but tears are good for the complextion.  This will be a wonderful song.  Have you already set it to music?  Great work,  ME
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2 posted 2001-09-08 11:50 PM


I agree...this would be a great song!
I like it

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