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0 posted 2001-09-08 06:00 PM




Sweep Me Off My Feet
By: Noah Eaton
9/8/01

Sweep me off my feet
Deep down into your romantic abode
Take me to where the stars kiss the sea
Across these cosmic bridges we'll float

Show me your heart's mirror
To see myself picture-perfect with you
When you're with me, the heavens seem clearer
All my promises replenish and my hopes renew

Kiss my yearning lips, honey
May this kiss bring us back for myriads more
Balm me in the warmth of your soft body
I'll give you my love, my skin, my promise, and so much more

I'll sweep you off your feet
With the words my heart feels when I look at you
I'll carry you as you faint into loves daydreams
Take me...I'm yours, to always love and comfort you...

© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-09-08 06:15 PM


Very nice poem...we all love that feeling of being swept off our feet : )
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2 posted 2001-09-09 09:58 AM


Great romantic write, Noah...beautiful iamges!

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tried to write a letter
to tell you how I feel,
but all I kept on writing
was slipping on the tears from the day...

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3 posted 2001-09-09 10:05 AM


and you swept me of my feet....beautiful penned.

Charisma

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