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NightShadow
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0 posted 2001-09-08 04:59 PM


Mind Control

Things kept inside
Might eat away at me
But do I do anything?
Do I show them?
No, no.. I cant do that
Why people ask me why would I do that
To hurt others?
To get hurt?
No, no.. I just cant do that
My mind is in control
It wont let me do that
Why, must people bug me
Its the way I am
Things kept inside
helps me heal
but makes me hard
But who cares?
Do I?
Does anyone else?
I don’t know
Do I care if they do?
My mind is taking control
I cant get out
This is how and who I am
Always, don’t change me
I think I like it this way
To hide, to be different
Not to show me
Not to show how I feel
That’s the way it is.
My mind is in control
of the Things kept inside
Only to come out
One day
Will I explode?
Will I cry?
Will I kill?
Or will I die
That, is the underlying question
Of My Mind, taking over control.
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This is dedicated to one of my friends.. He was my inspiration for this. *lol*

"Its a fearful thing to love what death can touch" -BlakRose

© Copyright 2001 Sarah Jeffers - All Rights Reserved
RSEvans
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1 posted 2001-09-08 05:04 PM


I care...
RosePetal
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2 posted 2001-09-08 06:10 PM


A mind is a terrible thing to waste, hehe.
Good post.

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3 posted 2001-09-08 08:35 PM


this has some bite to it.....well done!  

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Alan
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4 posted 2001-09-08 08:53 PM


nightshadow....I liked this. I can relate to it.  Good write
alan

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