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NightShadow
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since 2001-09-04
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New Jersey

0 posted 2001-09-08 04:53 PM


Help me

God help me think
God help me grow
No matter why, nor how
I need to know
Why things happen as they do
To always make my happiness turn blue
God help me learn
God help me be calm
In the musty days ahead
Through tears and smiles
Just God, help me be me

"Its a fearful thing to love what death can touch" -BlakRose

© Copyright 2001 Sarah Jeffers - All Rights Reserved
RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
1 posted 2001-09-08 05:05 PM


A silent prayer can crumble mountains...
RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
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Tulsa, OK, USA
2 posted 2001-09-08 05:30 PM


Posting another reply since the last one didn't increase the count nor move this poem back up to the top where it belongs.  Well written.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-09-09 04:53 AM


I think it pays to go right to the source sometimes...I have found that God doesn't always do what we want...but he could if he wanted to...James
Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
4 posted 2001-09-10 01:42 PM


Let go and let God
Sometimes what we think we want isn't whats best
~Connie~

Sven
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5 posted 2001-09-10 07:18 PM


your prayers are heard and answered. . .

wonderfully done. . . short and flowing. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

NightShadow
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since 2001-09-04
Posts 127
New Jersey
6 posted 2001-09-11 08:43 AM


Thank you all very much..  

"Its a fearful thing to love what death can touch" -BlakRose

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