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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2001-09-08 02:19 AM


Im not going to stop
                i said im  not going to stop
        until i've thrown every word at you
              
           have damaged every part of you
       i made this             i really made this
              CUSTOMER  APPRECIATION
           and i de(a)dicate it to you

                Hold     this reason
                need this  reason
                 for being
                   in
                  such a rush
                soaked and rushed

            Hormones all in charge
          Mowing down green hills
           with oNly eyes and knives
                   to Bear witness
                        to this
                    Painless Ocean
                   and of course
          its saying  it must be going..  
               Let me out of here
                    and
           come to this decision
            or it will come to you

             God has missions for us all
              we are a volunteer army
                      with
                 no need for weapons
              We have flesh
               and flesh is best

                 you can
             tape up my skull
              laughing as i go
             taping up my soul
          whats blood between lovers..?
          Monsters who confuse brothers
                 for biters
                are better off dead
                  Dont you think?
                    
                        
             Everything is all a trait
            and i would trade it away
            for a breath of fresh air
               But a
repeat offender
        A blood drinker
              A quick thinker
               has no such luxury

                    Is
           Awkward in public Places
         knows  soil is  better
          than  ripping  off those faces

            Someones running out of patience
                     with those
                       caught
                 awkward in public places    
               But this will have  to wait
                  for the next scare
                    The nude care

                From ear to Smiling ear
               I want you           HERE.
                       Barely here
             with all your pregnant pauses
                     lost causes
                  Fetched and Thrown
                    An empty library
                       to call my own
              

no longer afraid of the dark or midday shadows nothing so ridiculously teenage and desperate

© Copyright 2001 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-09-09 12:07 PM


Hey there-
I really liked this stanza..

             God has missions for us all
              we are a volunteer army
                      with
                 no need for weapons
              We have flesh
               and flesh is best

It's very true. Keep the poems coming sweetie!

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
2 posted 2001-09-09 06:08 PM


Wow, great way to release a magnitude of pent up energy, it almost wore me out reading it...LOL
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