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a simultaneous tanka |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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soaked in pounding rain, umbrellas pop together~ sheltered guys move on, not thinking they may be toys controlled as such by angels |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Alright...... great idea and well done! "sheltered guys move on, not thinking they may be toys controlled as such by angels" Very interesting! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah, I like this image my friend. . . to think that we're all just "puppets" of a sort. . . great job. . .  ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
not thinking they may be toys controlled as such by angels ======================================= hmm..amazing what lust will do eh! or love, at times... enjoyed this kaile hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
...i dunno..i read this two different ways..LOL could be, we as earth dwellers are the angels "play things"..? either way..interesting write my friend..  hugs, g |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The thought reminds me of a book called 'The God Game' by Andrew Greeley. Interesting and very nicely writen. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Interesting how easily we are conditioned by superior and outside forces....you describe it very well.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Very, very nicely done~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you all for your comments  this thought struck me when i was about to cross the road and i saw several people opening their umbrellas at the same time, as if being remote controlled by a higher being above...  dgvarner, will be very interested to hear of your first reading about lust..i try to derive that reading but alas, couldn't... nonetheless, i think its way cool that you got two different readings..makes me happy  |
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