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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-09-07 11:42 PM



Believe

bare, page, void thee be
vengeance, retribution, we
write, as poets, carve

sweet, trilogies sing
bearing lines theology
to those who listen

carpenters, unite
build again bridges to bring
union in His sight


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2001-09-07 11:48 PM


Nothing like a positive attitude salted with faith and promise....and the world grows bigger and bigger ....Nicely put Karilea!   Clever as usual!
EagleOne
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2 posted 2001-09-08 12:18 PM


I like these, upbeat but with a message. Well done!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


Duncan
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3 posted 2001-09-08 12:58 PM


If all faith was communicated as sincerely and gently as this, the world may claim a few more believers.  I enjoyed this alot.
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4 posted 2001-09-08 01:14 PM


Karilea~
I believe !  I believe !  I believe !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

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with you
5 posted 2001-09-08 01:18 PM


Beautiful Sunshine   you made me smile big with this....and "da kaka" says she wants to write like you.  
RSEvans
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6 posted 2001-09-08 01:19 PM


all smiles...
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2001-09-08 01:20 PM


Lovely....very lovely!

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

Logan
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8 posted 2001-09-08 01:51 PM


To believe, makes us go back to all the things we believe in, then, now and future...very nicely done, Sissie, very gentle smile
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9 posted 2001-09-08 01:57 PM


love the message within.

excellent penned.

((hugs))
Charisma

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10 posted 2001-09-08 08:32 PM


truly an awesome message...enjoyed this LOVELY read.

if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry-

vlraynes
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11 posted 2001-09-08 08:35 PM



Karilea-
   Me too!  I believe!!!  
   This is awesome, my friend!
   Love it!  

   Hugs,
   ~vicky



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truly met the poet."
-vlraynes
Vicky's Maze Of Muses

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 09-08-2001).]

shadow974
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12 posted 2001-09-08 08:40 PM


Caring and healing words, nice write.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

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