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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2001-09-07 04:36 PM


You
My friend
Are
In danger

I
Am
Your helpless
Fate


(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


© Copyright 2001 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
1 posted 2001-09-07 04:46 PM




God.....You did it again....
So powerful Mark that It suspended my breath for a moment....

Thank you
*********************

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2 posted 2001-09-07 04:50 PM



Said the
spider
to the
fly

Well done!

Zinsser
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Calif.
3 posted 2001-09-07 04:53 PM


LOL   I like this one
~Connie~

MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2001-09-07 05:52 PM


Wow, Melody -- now you're leaving ME breathless!

My Lady, that's a cute take.

Connie, glad to hear you laugh again.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2001-09-07 06:22 PM


I'm seeing the count coming around the shadowed wall. Strong..I like these poetic exercises.
Sandra

MARK V SHELDON
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6 posted 2001-09-07 07:33 PM


MooHooHaaHaaHaa...  MooHooHaaHaaHaa! ;->

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


VAS
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7 posted 2001-09-08 10:59 AM


very very intersting piece, enjoyed the comments it evoked, too, esp. Lady's, heh heh heh

so many dimensions are held in your 20 or less

MARK V SHELDON
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8 posted 2001-09-08 11:06 AM


Virginia -- I guess you can tell that I love dimension travel...  It's an honor to evoke.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


rwood
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9 posted 2001-09-08 03:49 PM


Very Hannibal this is to me! Nicely done Mark!

Sincerely,
Regina

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2001-09-08 03:57 PM


Mark - danger I have known. Fate is my friend. You have said it very strongly...

BC

MARK V SHELDON
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11 posted 2001-09-08 04:59 PM


Regina:  "Fly, fly, fly....  fly, fly, fly..."  ;->

Thanks, Bill -- sounds like you've got it under control, then.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


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