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RSEvans
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0 posted 2001-09-07 04:35 PM


Your words have the power to wound and heal
  And the elloquent writings are vivid and real.
I feel when your hurting, I know when your sad
  I feel your love flow from pen onto pad.
You are my dear poetess, sent from above
  Imprisoning me within written bars of love.
I am a willing prisoner, your loving slave,
  Your soulful reminder of a love you can save.
I sit here within myself, while we're apart
  Given a will, by your pen on my heart
To woo you with words, let you know how I feel,
  So that you never doubt my feelings are real.
I love you my poetess, my muse and my love
  And I thank God for sending you to me from above.

© Copyright 2001 Rob Evans - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-09-07 04:38 PM


Oh, sweet joy...this is sooo beautiful!

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

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2 posted 2001-09-07 06:24 PM


Beautiful, perfect Love poem.
Sandra

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Member Patricius
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3 posted 2001-09-07 06:35 PM


"Given a will by your pen on my heart." I love this!!!!

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
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state of confusion
4 posted 2001-09-07 07:03 PM


Very lovely tribute!

Corinne

The Rusty Knight
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5 posted 2001-09-07 07:42 PM


Life seems to go a lot smother when we have someone like you have so aptly described

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

snowpants
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6 posted 2001-09-07 08:07 PM


Beautiful, just beautiful, RSEvans...the rhyme and flow are great...I truly enjoyed this!

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tried to write a letter
to tell you how I feel,
but all I kept on writing
was slipping on the tears from the day...

NightShadow
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since 2001-09-04
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7 posted 2001-09-08 12:39 PM


very sweet poem!
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