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Pieces Of Me
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Pieces Of Me |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Hello Passions, it's been a while huh? I told y'll I would be back though.....I'm not gonna lie to y'll though...I'm just not into poetry as much as I used to be.....I still enjoy writing but its' not the center of my life anymore....anyways, I hope y'll enjoy my poem!! Everytime I shine and unveil my souls' shield of rhyme, I'm giving you all piece of me, a piece of my mind, a piece of my ideology, my deep philosophies, my attitude, and if you feel what I'm writing, I thank you with deep gratitude because, I live to write and enlight, everyone in sight because, every confused or lost soul, needs a guiding light so, behold these sweet, colorful, and chocolate rhymes my heart unfolds and picture me as a bag of M&Ms' cause, my words will melt through your soul. When I die, I hope that my literature becomes sacred because, when I bare my soul, I bare butt-naked so, take a piece of me, for the enhancement of your soul take a piece of me and wear me like, silver and gold. Take a piece of me, by the second, by the minute, by the hour, plant my seed of knowledge in your head and let it blossom like a flower. Just take a piece of me, a piece of my mystique because, you're experiencing, something truly unique! [This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (edited 09-09-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I must say after reading this piece, I have just experienced SOMEONE very unique! And, what a pleasure it is! Thank you for making me smile today! ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I can almost hear the full musical production to these words, but at the same time, it's kinda fresh not to. A refreshing and assertive style with a smile -- nice work, Nate. -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'll take some of those M&M's Nate...they melt in your soul not in your hand...James |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
because, every confused or lost soul, needs a guiding light so, behold these sweet, colorful and chocolate rhymes my heart unfolds and picture me as a bag of M&Ms' cause, my words will melt through your soul. I REALLY LIKE THIS PART, IT IS UNIQUE LIKE YOU! <3 RosePetal |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Glad to see your name again, have missed ya...and I like these pieces of you... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nate, my friend~ Nice to see you in here with your usual up-beat self ! LOL !  Great use of metaphor ... keep it going~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Nate it's great to see you....especially when you are on my wavelength like this... have been busy updating my homepage...and the name I chose? "Pieces of ME..." grin.. Man I wish I wrote your poem!  http://poets2000.com/cgi-bin/index.pl?sitename=poetry42&item=home&password=310331exPvWRWXcqc |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I wanna thank everyone for their sweet comments and I promise, I'll read and post your poems when I get a chance....thank you once again! Nathan |
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DYME Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 104Texas |
You never cease to amaze me. Keep it up. Peace. I'm not crazy...I have papers to prove it!! |
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