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kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2001-09-07 02:01 PM

my mom squinted
when she awoke
to find me
with a pierced earlobe
and dyed brown hair

and lamented
how emotionally empty
i had to be
to want to resort to such stunts

to which my father picked up pace
and bellowed about
what a changed person i have become,
with no regard to
societal convention
and their emotions

and they chided,
fussed,
warned,
pleaded,
sighed,
moaned etc

but well, self fulfillment presided
and i was still proud
that i had the courage
to do the things
i have always wanted to do

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-09-07 02:03 PM

Happy Birthday!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-09-07 02:08 PM

yes happy birthday!! hey I pierced my ear too... long time ago now..and had a few people around me "scream"... but it was something I wanted...

nicely done by the way.... story told in a few words with depths there for the reader to ponder...

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

3 posted 2001-09-07 02:18 PM

Fate - Yanno, seeing how they reacted to that earring thingie - you oughta really shake them up - tomorrow morning, put on a dress and wig, wake them up, and tell them,
"Mom and Dad, I've been thinking....." lol - - Great poem you wrote here.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-09-07 08:23 PM

Kaile~
Happy Birthday my friend !

I can't think of anything I'd rather have than something that made me happy !
Good for you ...

Now go *hug* them both ! !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

5 posted 2001-09-07 11:21 PM

thank you, Lady in White, this birthday sure was memorable!

Cpat Hair, thank you for the compliment..i'm flattered that you think there is something within this thread for you to ponder on...this was just a journal of a brat, who wanted to get his way....

John, you crack me up!...thanks but no thanks

but i guess i will keep that in mind, huh?

Marge, glad you agree...and don't worry about my parents...life goes on peacefully in my household now

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

6 posted 2001-09-09 10:54 PM

i love this..this one makes me smile..

lol i can just see such scenario..youve written it so perfectly..the images are right there in front of me...

much enjoyed this read kaile..
and if i didnt tell you ...happy (late) birthday..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"no man was ever so much deceived
by another than by himself, you see..." ~corey hart

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

7 posted 2001-09-10 08:06 AM

dgvarner, im glad this gave you a chuckle

thanks for your wishes!

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