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NightShadow
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0 posted 09-07-2001 01:56 PM       View Profile for NightShadow   Email NightShadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit NightShadow's Home Page   View IP for NightShadow

Tears

Tears come fast
Blur my vision
Make me tremble
Stumble, fall
Tears so thick
You can't stop crying
More, more, never ending
The tear streaks
Cover my face
They don't wipe away
Tears come fast
Unstopping all the day


"Its a fearful thing to love what death can touch" -BlakRose

[This message has been edited by NightShadow (edited 09-07-2001).]

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1 posted 09-07-2001 02:30 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RosePetal

*Wiping your tears* Nice work! Can't wait to see more from you.

<3 RosePetal
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2 posted 09-07-2001 02:39 PM       View Profile for NightShadow   Email NightShadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit NightShadow's Home Page   View IP for NightShadow

Thanks!  
Charisma
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3 posted 09-07-2001 03:18 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

sometimes its better to release tears when your sad. Heartfelt penned.

Charisma
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4 posted 09-07-2001 04:21 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

When tears fall like raindrops they leave stains on our souls.  Don't cry, my rose...smile and think of me.
DreamRomancer
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The tears shall pass
A rainbow shall form
Happiness shall shine
Love shall grow
Memories shall make
of the tears that fall

Very good pen!!!!
Your works touch my soul and caress my heart
Keep up the good work

With my pen I shall create,
With my mind I shall explore,
With my strength I shall endure,
With my poetry I shall have legacy.

Enchantress
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6 posted 09-24-2001 07:50 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Ahh, I can feel your heartache.  Hope all is well now.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

SmartChick
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This is a very good poem. I like it.
NightShadow
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8 posted 09-25-2001 08:03 AM       View Profile for NightShadow   Email NightShadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit NightShadow's Home Page   View IP for NightShadow

Thanks.. I don't know if it will ever go away.. but thanks.. *smiles*

A Life without Love, is no life at all...

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