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NightShadow
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0 posted 2001-09-07 08:34 AM


You are my Knight In Shining Armor
   The one who looks out for me
You are my Guardian Angel
   Shining down on me
You are my newfound love
   my heart beats for you
You are my guiding light
     making sure I don't lose my way..


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*phew* I think I forgot how to write poetry..

"Its a fearful thing to love what death can touch" -BlakRose

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1 posted 2001-09-07 09:25 AM


this is so lovely, I don't think you forgot at all!!  

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Zinsser
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2 posted 2001-09-07 09:29 AM


This is wonderfull!!!
I must admit that the first line scared the poop out of me  LOL I wrote one last night that starts the same way...: ) I will post in a bit..
~ Connie~

RSEvans
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3 posted 2001-09-07 11:04 AM


I've been lots of things...Thank you, My Rose....
LngJhnAg
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4 posted 2001-09-07 11:15 AM


Nightly lady - it looks like you've got it bad.  I can see the feelings all the way from here.
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state of mind
5 posted 2001-09-07 04:05 PM


This was great. I don't think you forgot how to write.


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DreamRomancer
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6 posted 2001-09-26 07:33 PM


Your talent is like riding a bike.  You'll never forget how.  You can only get better and better.  I've watched your poetry blossom and grow.  Keep up the good work my dear!

With my pen I shall create,
With my mind I shall explore,
With my strength I shall endure,
With my poetry I shall have legacy.

Zukene_Chic
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7 posted 2001-09-26 10:30 PM


That is the sweetest thing ever!
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