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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-09-07 04:59 AM


Don't Go Breakin' My Heart

Those were the days when I
believed she cared for me.
I thought she was so hot.
My heart was filled
with tender romantic thoughts.

Then one day
she took it all away
and I didn't feel
romantic anymore.

New feelings rushed in
to fill the void.
I felt fragmented like
my heart had been destroyed.

But you never have
much choice in these matters.
They never say "I have to go now.
Is that all right with you?"
They never say "I'll stay
if you want me too."

No...they just go.

Jameslee
September07,2001

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 09-07-2001).]

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Romy
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1 posted 2001-09-07 08:55 AM


So true, they don't ask permission to leave, but if my first love had, I'd still be with him. And I wouldn't have had a chance to meet the man that I really love...
Great poem!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2001-09-07 09:19 AM


James,
No answers just enjoyed the write.

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with you
3 posted 2001-09-07 09:28 AM


sadly, yes, they do just go......
this is really good James. Sad and thoughtful   ((hugs))

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MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
4 posted 2001-09-07 10:06 AM




So sad and heartfelt .....I hope you have got over it James

Thank you
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