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Logan
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0 posted 2001-09-06 08:40 PM


Spider webs intricate to the sight
all so different, all so right.
Carpet of silver in suns greet,
more peaceful look you couldn’t seek.

Green of grasses kissed with wet,
soaks of moisture, a painting set.
Oils of nature creating fine art
not for the walls, only the heart.
All it takes, is to look and see,
or is the forest hiding the tree.

We move too fast and never seek,
what nature has give to our keep.
Fast paced lives are over too soon,
to miss the call of surrounding tune.
Take a moment to savor life,
a new world beckons to your sight.


© Copyright 2001 Logan - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2001-09-06 08:48 PM


Ah dear Logan...such a gentle write.  But, truer words have never been spoken.  We could all learn a lesson from this one...well done! ...soft smile.

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

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2 posted 2001-09-06 08:54 PM


This is lovely. We should all take time out to take in natures bounty.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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3 posted 2001-09-06 09:50 PM


Tis true, yet it seems less beautiful without the one you love.. Sigh..
Sandra

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4 posted 2001-09-06 10:02 PM


Logan:

If we but look.

In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)

Alan
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5 posted 2001-09-06 10:30 PM


good Job Logan. it is a very true read.
alan

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6 posted 2001-09-06 10:39 PM



Fairies wearing early morning jewelry of dewdrops on webbed necklaces...you've painted a picture as only you can...

well done Sir...

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7 posted 2001-09-06 10:44 PM


Logan~

'Green of grasses kissed with wet,
soaks of moisture, a painting set.
Oils of nature creating fine art
not for the walls, only the heart.
All it takes, is to look and see,
or is the forest hiding the tree.'


I love to be up before the sun
just to gather images left by the night dew fairies~
You've been there ... I *smile*~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2001-09-07 03:35 AM


ah...was like being rocked to sleep.
You have a soothing way about you Logan.  
Off to dreams now...(me hopes)

Nan
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9 posted 2001-09-07 08:02 AM


Indeed - Early morning is the best... I like it..
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10 posted 2001-09-07 08:10 AM


We move too fast and never seek,
what nature has give to our keep.
Fast paced lives are over too soon,
to miss the call of surrounding tune.
Take a moment to savor life,
a new world beckons to your sight.

yes this si something we all need to remember... very nicely done Logan..I enjoyed

MARK V SHELDON
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11 posted 2001-09-07 08:47 AM


Treasures, miracles, and inspiring lessons of art are indeed all about us, daily, and sometimes all it takes is a gentle reminder from a caring sage to nudge us to remember this wisdom...  Thank you.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


NightShadow
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12 posted 2001-09-07 09:12 AM


Very sweet poem.  Reminds me of an English project I had once... You have a way with words..

"Its a fearful thing to love what death can touch" -BlakRose

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13 posted 2001-09-15 02:21 AM


You just keep getting better and better, every time i read one of your poems i think "this one is my favorite" and yet when i read the next its even better.  

I miss the fire, my email is onedeepblue@hotmail.com if you want to get in touch.

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14 posted 2001-09-15 07:28 AM



To see this come to the top again, is a blessing.  All good things shall rise again...

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15 posted 2001-09-15 07:34 AM


Beautiful penned, thanks for sharing.

Charisma

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16 posted 2001-09-16 12:04 PM


Oh but you captured it beautifully, this is my favorite time of day, and I absolutely love the spiderwebs in the morning covered with dew, in other words, I just loved this.

~*Be Kind To Your Fellow Man, Lend Him A Helping Hand, Put A Little Love In Your Heart*~

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