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RosePetal
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0 posted 2001-09-06 04:17 PM


Millions of stars silhouette the moon
What a radiant night it is!
Pleading with the stars
To take me where my true love lives

His eyes of sapphire
His genuine allure
In a sense, I'm content
Like never before

Like diamonds
to delicate hands
The significance of a red rose
Purely for romance

I'm not an angel
Though he treats me so preciously
Sometimes it's a cold reality
Not having him next to me

When asked "What is Love"?
Many cannot give an explanation
I'd jeopardize my life for his
In any situation

In my eyes, He possesses royalty
More so without a crown upon his head
He's deserving of a castle
Complete with 24KT gold posts upon his bed

I love this man
More than life Itself
He will bring happiness to one lucky girl
May it be me-or someone else

I pray it will be me
A little wishful thinking
His bubbling vitality
In which I bask.

© Copyright 2001 Joanna - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-09-06 04:18 PM


Enjoy...James
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2 posted 2001-09-06 06:31 PM


Oh...this is just filled with happiness. I remember this kind of feeling, and you seem to pour all of it into this poem. I'm glad you're here and enjoying yourself!

Don't gain my affections then cover my eyes. Don't sweep me off my feet then fail to catch me before I hit the floor.

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3 posted 2001-09-06 07:44 PM


'I love this man
More than life Itself
He will bring happiness to one lucky girl
May it be me-or someone else

I pray it will be me
A little wishful thinking
His bubbling vitality
In which I bask.'

Beautiful and emotional piece, RosePetal...great display of your affection for one you hold close...I like this a lot!

sp  

tried to write a letter
to tell you how I feel,
but all I kept on writing
was slipping on the tears from the day...

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