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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2001-09-06 03:26 PM



      Resuscitation  (senryu)


gently with a kiss
tenderly touching my face
massages my heart

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)  Shakespeare

© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
LngJhnAg
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1 posted 2001-09-06 03:43 PM


helen - I love this - it is real tight.  However, I wish you hadn't written it just now, as my kitty-kicking urges are especially strong around senryus.  erk - here comes one now

kitty comes quickly,
canopener pheremones,
hide the pit bull scent.


Oooooo, I love the imagery - lol - But please don't tell Pandora or Sunshine - They can be VERY domineering about these things

1slick_lady
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2 posted 2001-09-06 03:45 PM


LOL
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3 posted 2001-09-06 04:01 PM



Now who would think wrong
that passion and it's song sung
would bring out Long John?

kicking kitties he
his forte though wrong it be
bad, bad ol' Long John

Helen please don't cry
or Long John will turn to mush
then fall, Kitties crushed!

LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
4 posted 2001-09-06 04:07 PM


Lady - *chortle chortle* - what a wonderful flow of thought here - as for kitties being crushed - not hardly - unless I could figure out some way to fall onto my boots - heh
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5 posted 2001-09-06 05:44 PM


Helen,
very good .... and I love all the posts too   LOL

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6 posted 2001-09-07 12:18 PM


interesting title...lovely thoughts
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7 posted 2001-09-08 09:59 AM


powerfully woven!
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