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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-09-06 02:57 PM


Pickup Truck

Lost my woman
and wrecked my truck
and my dogs
goin' down the road
ain't that just my luck.
Sure miss my pickup truck.
For now I'll
just drown my sorrow
in this whisky bottle.
Get another truck
when I'm sober tomorrow.

Jameslee
September06,2001

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1slick_lady
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1 posted 2001-09-06 02:58 PM


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2 posted 2001-09-06 03:07 PM



LJA will lose his britches over this one...!

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2001-09-06 03:11 PM


ROFL ... Sounds like an old fashioned country and western song James! I'm sure LngJhn will appreciate this, and thanks for the grins.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

LngJhnAg
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4 posted 2001-09-06 03:13 PM


ROFL  Ohhhh, yeahhhhh - Now THIS is real poetry!!!  I can almost hear the blues beat in the background.  I especially like the part about missing the truck - great piece of Americana writing here.  Way to go, Jamie, me lad.
paladin
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5 posted 2001-09-06 03:55 PM


I had a old fishing buddy who's wife ran away with his brother driving his pick up truck.The thing that hurt the moast was his bass boat was hitched on the back of the truck.

paladin

Tracey
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6 posted 2001-09-06 08:47 PM


ROFLMAO (again). Brilliant. This is music. Sing it baby, sing it.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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