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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2001-09-06 12:54 PM



Poetry Land

wondering sometimes if this was planned
I sit here with no pen in hand
keyboard you see now takes the stand
hoping to give you what you demand
myself you see, I am just trying to expand
to give you words that are not very bland
for some it is easy to write so grande
making words into music like a band
every word, every syllable counted strand by strand
until the hour glass has run out of sand
bottled up words, and some have been canned
glad you all write in this poetry land.



A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

© Copyright 2001 Bernard Slicker - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-09-06 10:00 PM


BSlicker~
Thanks for sharing a thanks~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Enchantress
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2 posted 2001-09-06 10:10 PM


Ah Bernie, very well said!  Yes, we all try, do we not?  Enjoyed!

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

Alan
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3 posted 2001-09-06 10:12 PM


bslicker...this is good. enjoyed it
VAS
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4 posted 2001-09-06 10:27 PM


heh heh enjoyed the 'bottled up words' line most
bslicker
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5 posted 2001-09-06 10:56 PM


Thank you for reading Marge as always you are so so kind.

Enchantress, thanks and yes maybe someday i can be as good as a lot of people here.  But I don't write enough yet, but I will.

Thanks Alan glad you enjoyed it.

VAS thanks for reading and yes I need to order the words by the case load so I have lots of bottled up words to play with.... lol


And special thanks to Ron for having us to start with... Then putting up with us....

            

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 09-07-2001).]

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