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SEA

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with you

0 posted 2001-09-06 09:40 AM

I've lived a thousand lifetimes
lost within the love in your eyes
it only took one thoughtful glance
for my soul to recognize

To see what was missing
to feel far beyond this world's ties
more love than all of heaven
revealed in your eyes

An honesty of purest form
unconditional trust given, in your eyes
a quiet knowing, a deeper kind of understand
a truth above, dispelling all their lies

Soft unspoken emotion, for words do fail
no moonlit beach, no breathtaking sunrise
no poetry, no songs of love could ever describe
all the wondrous beauty, I see in your eyes

There is just no comparing
to all I have found in your eyes
and so I am reduced to simply breathing
contented loving sighs

~SEA~

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2001-09-06 09:49 AM

There is just no comparing
to all I have found in your eyes
and so I am reduced to simply breathing
contented loving sighs

Beautiful done Sea!!

Charisma

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

2 posted 2001-09-06 10:00 AM

To be content...is to leave behind shadows of smiles...

well done!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-09-06 10:04 AM

Sea,
Well you did it this time. One read of this and your lost. Enjoyed

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

4 posted 2001-09-06 10:12 AM

Sea,

It has been said "the eyes are the window to the soul" ,but not in such a lovely way.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2001-09-06 10:22 AM

OH Sea, this is exquisite!! Breathtaking writing, love just pours from your soul in this piece!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

6 posted 2001-09-06 10:44 AM

absolutely perfectly beautiful......

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

7 posted 2001-09-06 10:53 AM

Such a lovely heartfelt write.....your pen poured out with so much love in this....

I wish that you will always have this love .....forever.

Thank you
************************

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-09-06 03:04 PM

SEA~
Girl ... you got the romance going on ! !
Loveliest reflections in those eyes~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2001-09-06 03:12 PM

Soft unspoken emotion, for words do fail
no moonlit beach, no breathtaking sunrise
no poetry, no songs of love could ever describe
all the wondrous beauty, I see in your eyes
==============================

Sea-girlie that verse alone is worth its weight in poetic gold...
the whole intend is beautiful
very well done poetess of the sigh

jm

A man who asks a woman to lie for him, is a man who will lie to that woman.
A woman who lies for a man, is a woman who lies to herself.
(vise versa)

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2001-09-06 05:02 PM

Sea, This is an incredible write...so much love pours out of these words. Very enjoyable read! Thanks for sharing this with us other 'hopeless romantics.'

~Time has cast a spell on you
so you won't ever forget me~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

11 posted 2001-09-06 05:07 PM

Sea, I have become lost in my love's eyes so many times as well. Well written. Thankyou.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

12 posted 2001-09-07 12:11 PM

There is just no comparing
to all I have found in your eyes
and so I am reduced to simply breathing
contented loving sighs

We should all be so contentedly reduced. You write love beautifully.

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

13 posted 2001-09-07 12:19 PM

Breath-taking!! Very good poem.
hats off to you!

<3 RosePetal

Balladeer

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

14 posted 2001-09-07 12:25 PM

You melt me when you write like this, SEA. I only have AYES for you!

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

15 posted 2001-09-07 12:36 PM

So beautiful, you know that this likes me! I love romantic poetry and you bring it to life so well

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

16 posted 2001-09-07 12:58 PM

SEA-
   You write the most romantic poetry.
   I just love this...beautiful..

   Hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

17 posted 2001-09-07 04:50 AM

like the way you fit it all together...James

2dalimit
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Mississippi coast

18 posted 2001-09-07 05:34 AM

Well done. It is sweet and so romantic.

Melton

Cpat Hair

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19 posted 2001-09-07 08:18 AM

as usual.... impressive and heartfelt... very nice work Sea...always a pleasure to read your words...

SEA

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with you

20 posted 2001-09-07 09:19 AM

Well, isn't this nice to find this morning

You all have given me such big warm fuzzies.

thank you, each of you, so much.
You guys are the best!

"Deputy Moderator ~ Open Forum"

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

21 posted 2001-09-07 10:10 AM

SEA...would have sworn I'd posted on this way up at the top. As I remember it I was the first post on it...but where is it...???

Anyway, better to have posted than to not have posted at all (wow - did I say that??)
--this is just beautiful my friends. The eyes know all, don't they?

The rain...hmmm - are you talking about this hot, sultry, thick, moisture laden air we've had for the last couple of days...I can take a shower and have less moisture on my skin!

But it is in the forecast for today...now, if only...

jwesley

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

22 posted 2001-09-07 10:14 AM

YOU ARE SUCH A TEASE!! LOL
I'm dying over here.......
I love that kind of rain......
ok ok....I love ANY kind of rain LOL

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

23 posted 2001-09-08 08:44 PM

perfectly discribed...and VERY well written...wonderful piece about the beauty that lies in the eyes.

if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry-

SEA

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with you

24 posted 2001-09-08 08:46 PM

wow that was so sweet, thank you

shadow974
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

25 posted 2001-09-08 08:52 PM

Wonderfully romantic and loving piece SEA.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

SEA

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with you

26 posted 2001-09-08 08:53 PM

thank you

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