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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Shattered, I followed The vague path Before me, Leaving behind My valiant life Weary daylight, Holding together The knowledge That I had to Keep moving... Blind In your absence (Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON) "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was great Mark, I really liked it. Wishing you many successes on the road ahead. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Lovely write. Blind In your absence Speaks volumes If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mark, I have felt this poem a lot lately. Very strong words. Hope all is good for you.. Sandra |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Blind In your absence --------------- I have trailed down the page reading your lines .....Then I felt struck in my heart with that final line...... It is such a powerful line....telling so much.... Thank you dear.... ************************ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Sue, thank you for the wishes. Tracey -- volumes, indeed, and perhaps, volumes will continue to be written... Thank you for the visit. Sandra, all is good, not to worry... this is simply a combination of an assignment and a healing purge. Thank you for the "hope." My Melody -- then you have vicariously experienced this poem's powerful intent... Thank YOU for stopping by. -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Very very Good! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thank you, Connie. -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I really enjoyed the flow of this. The finality was an ending, but a new beginning as well. Superbly written! Sincerely, Regina |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I like this. The flow is wonderful. Sadly I know the road you are taking. Good luck. alan |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mark, This is not the end. It is not even the beginning of the end. But it is, perhaps, the end of the beginning. ...Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice...you continue to impress me with your works... good stuff Mark... good stuff indeed. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice...you continue to impress me with your works... good stuff Mark... good stuff indeed. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A good description of one in shock. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Regina, thank you. To every ending there is a new beginning, though not every new beginning has an ending... Thank you Alan. The road always seems longer when you're walking... Nancy: It's actually a spiral of perpetual motion with recollections and Wisdom to keep the sojourner company... I am honored, Ron, to hear such compliments from one of my favorite poets -- thank you very much. Richard -- I guess that kind of sums it up. -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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