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vandana
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0 posted 2001-09-05 08:57 PM



When your eyes shown love,
When your eyes
said It a lot,
When you looked Into my eyes,
And I saw love In your your eyes,
Which brighten my day today ,
When you slowly spoken the words
of love,
The love showed on your face,
So how I don't have to search places
for love,
I,
Now,found love,
The love been looking for a long time,
Through the storm ,
Through the time,
Through the dim weather,
When I found you,
Standing smiling,
saw a love In your eyes,
When eyes shown so much,
When your eyes shown love


[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 09-05-2001).]

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Sven
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1 posted 2001-09-05 09:06 PM


the eyes always show my friend. . .

well done. . .

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Alan
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2 posted 2001-09-05 09:11 PM


isn't love that shows wonderful. Good read. enjoyed this a lot.
alan

Duncan
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3 posted 2001-09-06 12:37 PM


When it shows in the eyes, the heart skips a beat.  Nice write.
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-09-06 05:36 AM


Wonderful...James
Tracey
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5 posted 2001-09-06 06:57 AM


Lucky you. Lovely tribute to your love

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6 posted 2001-09-06 08:18 AM


Nothing better than seeing love shine in someone's eyes. Nice poem.
Sandra

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7 posted 2001-09-06 09:24 AM


love is such a wonderful feeling.
enjoyed it a lot

Charisma


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8 posted 2001-09-06 03:02 PM


VanDana~
You lucky, lucky gal~
I'm sure you're the light in someone's eyes too~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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