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Alan
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right next door

0 posted 2001-09-05 08:40 PM



Would you go with me
To my private Island
I have just for you and me

We will walk in the moonlight
Wish upon the starlight
Hoping this night will never end

We will play in the sun
Acting like kids having fun
Holding hands and talking

While the clouds float above
We will make love
In the gentle surf

Everyday with you would be fine
We would have sunshine
Even on cloudy days

Our love will flow free
As if carried on the breeze
For this island is just for you and me
alan



© Copyright 2001 Alan - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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1 posted 2001-09-05 08:50 PM


It sounds beautiful to me!   Is this island in your mind? COOLERS! I love this!  

Don't gain my affections then cover my eyes. Don't sweep me off my feet then fail to catch me before I hit the floor.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-09-05 08:56 PM


WHAT TIME IS THE NEXT FLIGHT ??!
Oooh, I do love this picture!

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

Alan
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3 posted 2001-09-05 08:59 PM


temptress..thank you..i am glad that you liked it and got a smile.
alan

Dee
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Queensland, Australia
4 posted 2001-09-05 09:39 PM


Alan, this sounds so romantic. Lovely idea.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

Alan
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5 posted 2001-09-05 10:18 PM


Good....I could use some company...hehe
thanks Dee

Zinsser
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Calif.
6 posted 2001-09-05 10:31 PM


Alan: Just beautiful!!!!
  ~Connie~

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
7 posted 2001-09-05 10:33 PM


Now this sounds like a perfect place. It hums a peaceful sweet serenity of love. I'm with Enchantress. When's the next flight???

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Alan
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8 posted 2001-09-05 10:50 PM


Thank you Connie

Tracey..I am glad you like it. if you hurry it leaves tonite...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
9 posted 2001-09-05 11:11 PM


He's ignoring me Tracey...don't leave me here!!  Besides you're leaving for England and I get your seat!!  

~Time has cast a spell on you
  so you won't ever forget me~

Alan
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right next door
10 posted 2001-09-05 11:14 PM


now Enchantress...how could i ignore some one as sweet as you.
The Rusty Knight
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11 posted 2001-09-05 11:36 PM


We all have pictures in our head what our paradise would be...You painted yours well.  In fact if I win the lottery I will look for one just like it.  sunshine...native girls....palm trees.....lady poets.....ocean breeze....Dallas Cheerleaders....sorry to get carried away on your island.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Alan
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12 posted 2001-09-05 11:40 PM


hey...no problem Rusty..just so you have enough for two..thanks for the reply...the thoughts of the Dallas cheerleaders was nice.
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
13 posted 2001-09-06 08:00 AM


Alan, your magic island is full of all of us, now you may have to find a new one  
This was so inviting, I really would wish for exactly this..
Sandra

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
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where insanity meets breeding
14 posted 2001-09-06 08:04 AM


Enchantress, I'd skip the trip to England for a trip to that island (but only if there's a pub there!!! )

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Alan
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right next door
15 posted 2001-09-06 08:30 AM


Sandra...you are more than welcome to spend time on my island.

Tracey...you can find anything on my island except tears

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia
16 posted 2001-09-06 08:37 AM


Hey Alan what can I say
I am off booking my flight right away
Hope

Charisma
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17 posted 2001-09-06 09:27 AM


sounds good to me..so I'm on my way

Charisma

Alan
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18 posted 2001-09-06 11:09 AM


Hope...you know there is always room for you.

Charisma....come on little lady the partys just starting

Paula Finn
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missouri
19 posted 2001-09-07 12:13 PM


I'd go
Alan
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right next door
20 posted 2001-09-07 07:49 AM


Paula...you are more than welcome on my island anytime...
RosePetal
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21 posted 2001-09-08 11:09 AM


Damn, it sounds perfect Alan. I'm coming with the rest of the girls!!
<3 RosePetal

I'll be there by early evening, dont start without me hehe

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 09-08-2001).]

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