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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-09-05 12:00 PM


At the edge of the lighthouse you'll find me
Bathed in the golden glow of the sun
Won't you take my hand and join me
And along the sand you and I will run

By the edge of the water I'll kiss you
As love's kiss brings us down to our knees
So much love to be made in this paradise
As we are both so eager to please

How we'll succumb to our needs and desires
As we swim in this brilliant blue sea
We'll ride our own waves of passion
As towards heaven you will transport me

Soon the moon will shine like a beacon
As we search for constellations above
Then we'll dive with reckless abandon
Into our very own sea of love

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
1 posted 2001-09-05 12:03 PM


Suetang~

I would type my favourite lines, but, every verse is equally so beautiful.  I'm sure you know by now that I just love soulmate/romantic poetry.   This is one of your best, it really is breathtaking.
Into my library this goes~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
2 posted 2001-09-05 12:41 PM


A most tasty image.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
3 posted 2001-09-06 06:35 AM


Some people can really do love, you spell it out like a glorious scroll written for those in furturistic finding to read and weep. Astoundingly gorgeous.

Sincerely,
Regina

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
4 posted 2001-09-06 07:05 AM


How incredibly lovely. I hope one day I will be able to pen such loving joy. Until then, I shall just live vicariously through your words.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 414
Texas
5 posted 2001-09-06 05:44 PM


WOW and WOW again.....I love this poem....May I put it on parchment and a plaque.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

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