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Open Poetry #15

Sometimes I Feel...

NightShadow
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 127
New Jersey

0 posted 2001-09-04 08:55 PM

Sometimes I feel like a well,
           all dried up inside.
Sometimes I feel like a child,
           wanting everything I can't have.
Sometimes I feel like a bird,
           just wanting to fly away.
Somtimes I feel like a trapped cat,
           clawing to get free.
And Sometimes I Feel,
              free like me!

RSEvans
Senior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA

1 posted 2001-09-05 08:15 AM

All dried up inside? From what I can tell you are a well overflowing with emotion and compassion. Less a well than a fountain, my Rose...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-09-05 08:18 AM

NightShadow,
That pretty well covers it. Enjoyed

DreamRomancer
Junior Member

since 2001-09-18

Posts 46
Ohio, United States

3 posted 2001-09-26 07:42 PM

With passion and varacity of heart, you will never be reduced to a dried up well. I'd much rather use the phrase eternal spring to describe who you are inside.

With my pen I shall create,
With my mind I shall explore,
With my strength I shall endure,
With my poetry I shall have legacy.

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