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RSEvans
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0 posted 2001-09-04 05:05 PM


Limbs of sinew and garnished in beauty,
  You stretch through my life like a vine
Marking your way through my heart
  Letting me know that you're mine.
My Rose is wild born and lovely
  Like the crimson tear from my heart
She marks my waking with love's thoughts
  And my dreams with smiles from the start.
Her smile is like sunshine incarnate
  Her voice like the lilting of Spring
Her faith like the breath of a fresh Autumn breeze
  And she fills me such longing.
So know that I love you, my Rose
  Like no other man that you've known,
And one day, God willing and fate allowing
  I'd love to make you my own.


- For my BlakRose

Knowlege tempered by wisdom...Wisdom tamed by youth.


© Copyright 2001 Rob Evans - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-09-04 05:34 PM


I wondderful tribute to BlakRose.

                                  Dawn

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2 posted 2001-09-04 06:16 PM


I was wondering if you were ever going to post here again RS. Welcome back! Beautiful love poem, I'm sure Rose was thrilled by it.
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3 posted 2001-09-04 06:33 PM


wonderfully done. . . a true testament to love. . .

it's good to see you again my friend. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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4 posted 2001-09-04 08:02 PM


"You stretch through my life like a vine" I love that!! Great poem.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

NightShadow
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5 posted 2001-09-04 08:21 PM


Your Rose was thrilled, and deeply touched by the poem, it brought tears to my eyes..
Thank you, my Knight in Shining Armor....

Alan
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6 posted 2001-09-04 08:25 PM


A wonderful statement of love. Great read.
alan

Tracey
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7 posted 2001-09-04 09:01 PM


Ah this is just so sentimental. I love it. Both of you are very lucky

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

RSEvans
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8 posted 2001-09-05 08:14 AM


Thank you all for your wonderful responses.  Every time I come here, I'm swept away by the generous comments and supportive nature the forum offers.
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9 posted 2001-09-05 08:42 PM


enjoyed
Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2001-09-06 12:12 PM


RSEvans~
Thanks for coming home and gifting us with your rose~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2001-09-07 11:03 PM


A romantic and beautiful poem.  Hope your rose really appreciates it.

Betty Lou Hebert

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