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NightShadow
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0 posted 2001-09-04 04:16 PM


What If?
What if I said I love you?
What if I said I cared?
What if I said I need you?
What if I said Id be there?

What if I said that I would do it
Be with you till the day we die
What if I said that my heart
Doesn’t want to be apart from you.

What if I said I love you?
What if I said I cared?
What if I said I need you?
What if I said Ill be yours
for the rest of our lives.



© Copyright 2001 Sarah Jeffers - All Rights Reserved
RSEvans
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1 posted 2001-09-04 04:25 PM


Welcome to the forums!!!!  Glad I introduced you and this is a most welcome addition here.  Just in case you're wondering folks, this is a very dear friend and talented poetess and you best be nice...but I know you will...

Knowlege tempered by wisdom...Wisdom tamed by youth.


Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-09-04 04:29 PM



Welcome to Passions, Sarah!  Please check your E-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Nightshade
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Member Patricius
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just out of reach
3 posted 2001-09-04 04:48 PM


NightShadow - What if I said I liked this? I do. Welcome!!

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Enchantress
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4 posted 2001-09-04 05:08 PM


How lovely and tender....welcome to Passions!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

DawnG
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5 posted 2001-09-04 05:32 PM


This is a beautiful way to enter Passions. Full of passion for the one you love.

                                   Dawn

Poet deVine
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6 posted 2001-09-04 06:18 PM


Welcome to the family!! I look forward to reading more from you...
The Rusty Knight
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7 posted 2001-09-04 06:30 PM


Welcome to Passions, sometimes the place of a good poem, sometimes a great poem and sometimes a fun poem. But always a place of friendly people.   I liked your first piece.

Death comes not when we cease to breath, but when we cease to dream.

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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Netherlands
8 posted 2001-09-04 08:08 PM



What if I said I welcome you
What if I said you should stay
What if I said I like this too
What if I said only this: HURRAY

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

NightShadow
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since 2001-09-04
Posts 127
New Jersey
9 posted 2001-09-04 08:17 PM


Oh thank you so much for the warm responses.. I was so worried to post, I couldn't decide what to chose.. I hope to hear more from each of you, and look forward to reading your poetry as well! Again, thank you for the warm welcome!!!
NightShadow
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New Jersey
10 posted 2001-09-04 08:18 PM


btw, thanks for the greeting Sunshine, That was so cool!! I was glad to see it in my mailbox
Tracey
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11 posted 2001-09-04 08:33 PM


What a lovely song to love. I can hear it ringing. A great first post. Look forward to more

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Dee
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12 posted 2001-09-05 01:27 AM


Sarah, what a lovely entrance you made. Welcome to Passions.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

DreamRomancer
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since 2001-09-18
Posts 46
Ohio, United States
13 posted 2001-09-26 07:52 PM


What if I said YES YES YES to it all?
What if I wanted you as much as you do me?

Wow, that was so good that I got carried away

Keep up the good work dear!

With my pen I shall create,
With my mind I shall explore,
With my strength I shall endure,
With my poetry I shall have legacy.

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