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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2001-09-04 09:04 AM

Rewrite:

       A mid winter's scene

Within a glass and wood cocoon.
It's there I watched the bright of noon.
Fixed in a savings medium.

And stoic birds sing colic bard.
While trees bare ranks of avant-garde
Unborn lays yet in wait of spring.

Too soon to dow the blade of plough.
Too soon to crow the sun to now.
There beneath the sew of snow.

Impatience buds this moody still.
To put away the icy chill.
Midway midwives in dreamy state.

For in the winter's moody scene
Lies the seeds of the coming green.

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-09-04 09:12 AM

And here I am, just wanting Fall to color me in season....

So enjoyed, our Sy....

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-09-04 10:33 AM

Within a glass and wood cocoon.
It's there I watched the bright of noon
===========================
And stoic birds sing colic bard.
While trees bare ranks of avant-garde
Unborn lays yet in wait of spring.
=============================
Impatience buds this moody still.
To put away the icy chill.
Midway midwives in dreamy state.

For in the winter's moody scene
Lies the seeds of the coming green.
================================

Your clever imagery always impresses ...
as does your poetic turn of phrase.
SO???
just how much snow are you expecting on your golf courses of green anyway??? *L*
I'll send ya a Tinkerbell snowglobe

*WW*

me

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-09-04 11:21 AM

Decaflame,
Enjoyed your response.

JM,
You know there are all kinds of snow. LOL
Winkiewinkie Stinky

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-09-04 06:51 PM

it is ready to be that again isn't it??

great job Sy. . .love the rewrite. . .

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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-09-04 07:01 PM

Thank you Sven for the read and comment.

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