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Zinsser
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0 posted 2001-09-05 03:11 PM



Damn your looking good
Please forgive me for this look
But I just can't stop staring
I'm wondering what your wearing
Or are you free flying under there
For our picnic out some where
Let me find out, If you please
You know we'll never make it
To that grove of trees

           Thank You
         ~~~Connie~~~

© Copyright 2001 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2001-09-05 07:23 PM


interesting rhyme scheme...and interesting topic, I've wondered the same thing...it's a nice feeling
Zinsser
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2 posted 2001-09-05 07:27 PM


Shadow:   LOL  I had fun writing this...
          Thanks   : )
          ~Connie~

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3 posted 2001-09-05 08:07 PM


and thank you!!!

lol. . . too cute. . .

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Alan
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4 posted 2001-09-05 08:29 PM


you made me smile. thank you this is sooo cute
alan

Zinsser
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5 posted 2001-09-05 10:07 PM


Sven & Alan
Thank You and I'm glad I was able to  make you smile  
~Connie~

Tracey
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6 posted 2001-09-05 11:10 PM


This is cute. We all may wonder, but the rest of us have to much decorum to ask it!!!  .  

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Zinsser
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7 posted 2001-09-06 12:21 PM


Tracey: Thanks I can see your smile : )
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