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Paula Finn
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missouri

0 posted 2001-09-04 12:55 PM


Fingers to my cheek
A question in your soft eyes
Answered by your touch.

You know...

© Copyright 2001 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 2001-09-04 01:29 AM


mon cheri see voo play a la manana esta dontknowwhati'm saying but i like this lil write
Zinsser
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Calif.
2 posted 2001-09-04 02:44 AM


Very Good!  Love few words that say alot
ethome
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3 posted 2001-09-04 04:14 AM


I don't write in this style but I was able to capture the moment in this one!   Very tender Paula!  Well done!
EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
4 posted 2001-09-04 05:23 AM


My trips to Passions these days are all too rare, but they are certainly treats when I can read your work Paula. You have the knack of encompassing so much into your words, take care!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


jwesley
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5 posted 2001-09-04 11:32 AM


Hey! Whatever Walt said, I'll second, and run like hell!

Really like this'n my friend!

jwesley

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just out of reach
6 posted 2001-09-04 11:52 AM


Yes, the unspoken thought.....well done.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Trew
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since 2000-06-10
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Ottawa, Canada
7 posted 2001-09-04 12:38 PM


Sixteen words to express a thousand feelings.

I've missed this place.  Poetry, like yours, is the reason why.

A beautiful moment in time, Paula.
Thanks for sharing it!

Trev.

There are thoughts which are prayers.
There are moments when, whatever the posture of the body,
the soul is on its knees.
      
~~Victor Hugo~~

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2001-09-04 03:44 PM


Its nice to give or receive that special touch...James
Paula Finn
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Posts 5546
missouri
9 posted 2001-09-05 12:55 PM


Walt...lol oh you...you got me giggling Im glad you liked it

Zinsser...it doesnt always take a lot to say what you feel...thank you

ethome...you are too sweet my NB poet

EagleOne...and Ive missed you terribly ...dont stay away so long ok? Thank you  

jwesley...teehee run huh? maybe its something fun hahaha...Im glad you like this

Nightshade...when you are close unspoken thoughts are all you need...thanks

Trew... do you know how much Ive missed seeing you here? thank you my friend

james my sweetest friend...we always seem to be of one mind...sometimes its scary LOL  

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