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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I want it all intensified... no feeble vague of thought's impress... I need to feel the heat's perspire insistant longing on my breast I breathe a tough stance of conceal-- my heart beats bongos in my chest. I must nurture I must feel I must curl in embryo... I must suture I must heal... I must learn to let past go... Patience in a dawn, surreal-- the faith that I already know. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
sen o yuh you are a tough kitty |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I need to feel the heat's perspire Now that would be intense. Love the need and write. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I hear you Karen. I want it all intensified. Never feel anything by halves. I must learn to let past go Let me know if you figure out how to do that one, then you can pass me some tips. Beautiful reading. No wonder I can't go off to bed  Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I want it all intensified... no feeble vague of thought's impress... I need to feel the heat's perspire insistant longing on my breast =============================== I must heal... I must learn to let past go... Patience in a dawn, surreal-- the faith that I already know. =================================== sometimes I wonder if thats not the problem... feeling it all so intensely ... everything burns...but them that tis the mothy way I guess...and Im not sure Id change it it I could...(maybe just one of "those switches" to turn it off for a while..  once again you mirror me my twin... and Im smiling at you for that last line. hearthugs KA me A man who asks a woman to lie for him, is a man who will lie to that woman. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"I breathe a tough stance of conceal-- my heart beats bongos in my chest. I must nurture I must feel I must curl in embryo... I must suture I must heal... I must learn to let past go..." Always hard to drop the guard isn't it Celeste? It's hard to take the gamble again if we've already lost in a big way. Love the lines leading up to the above...real yearning poem! Anyway you got my vote for new but experienced rookie lover of the year!! Great writing Celeste! |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
intensified indeed.... the titles to some of these poems on this board are awesome...and this poem is a true display of talent... keep up the good work |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
we all must learn. . . but. . . do we ever?? well done my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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