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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-09-02 06:13 PM






Run little friends for the wind is blowing
Autumn is showing its presence here
Look the trees are bending over
And the rain will soon appear

Running fast along the water
Clinching to the schoolbags tight
Careful steps so they won't fall over
Reaching their homes on time? They might!



A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2001-09-02 06:17 PM


Titia,
A lovely write.

ethome
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2 posted 2001-09-02 06:47 PM


Hey Titia what a delightful picture and write!  Well done!
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3 posted 2001-09-02 07:10 PM


Titia~

What a beautiful poem~
Such lovely rhyme~
The photo sweet~
Pleasure mine~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2001-09-02 07:14 PM


Cool... big smiles
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5 posted 2001-09-02 07:16 PM


Such a sweet poem, thanks for making me smile.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Tracey
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6 posted 2001-09-02 08:04 PM


This is so sweet.  

Tracey

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Enchantress
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7 posted 2001-09-02 08:23 PM


So adorable, so tender, so true.  Well done!

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Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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8 posted 2001-09-02 09:36 PM


the title pulled me in and i enjoyed my stay here...
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9 posted 2001-09-02 11:08 PM



Titia-
   What a lovely little write.
   I enjoyed this one much!

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Titia Geertman
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10 posted 2001-09-03 04:44 PM


Thank you all. I just came across this sweet pic.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

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