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Hands of Love
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Hands of Love |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Gentle hands of love reach out across the miles Giving strength to overcome the fears Holding on to help me stand, and all the while Wiping from my face the lonely tears Hands that make the words that fill my heart with joy Within each word a secret loving kiss Like a child at Christmas with a brand new toy My days are filled with dreams and wondrous bliss Within your hands the magic of a sweet love song Has touched my heart while listening to you play You showed me it was meant for me to sing along And now I find I’m singing every day So, always will I cherish your sweet gentle touch The gift that I received from God above And always you will play the songs we love so much A lifetime lies within your hands of love... The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Blessed be those who inspire others... A well-written tribute of appreciation. -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a lovely poem of strength and devotion  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful romantic poem of loyalty and devotion! The presentation is very well done! |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Nicely done...pretty!  Michael Auguste~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
So glad that happiness has touched you my friend. A beautiful song it is. Sandra |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This seems to dance with serene comfort. What a beautiful read Tracey |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Definitely enjoyed this my friend...give one pause... jwesley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunnyOne~ Oh, I like it~ 'Within your hands the magic of a sweet love song Has touched my heart while listening to you play You showed me it was meant for me to sing along And now I find I’m singing every day' Keep singing, gal~ It's lovely to hear the smile in your verse~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
very ooooooh la la |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ MVS ~~~ Yes, where would we be without the inspiration of those we love? Thank you so much! ~~~ Melissa ~~~ Strength and devotion seem to walk hand and hand here......I thank you! ~~~ ethome ~~~ Thank you, my friend, as it was meant as a romantic tribute! ~~~ August ~~~ I am glad that you enjoyed this one, and I always appreciate seeing your replies! Thank you! ~~~ Sandra ~~~ It means a lot to have you read this, lil sis, and thank you! ~~~ Tracey ~~~ yes, the dance is one of deepest love...thank you very much for reading! ~~~ jwesley ~~~ and I always enjoy seeing your name in reply, and I thank you! ~~~ Marge ~~~ yes, there is definitely a smile, and the song will last a lifetime! Thank you, my friend! ~~~ wayoutwalt ~~~ ooh la la est tres bien! Thank you! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny May that beautiful song always remain within your heart and may you always be happy. This is absolutely beautiful. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
This is a wonderful thanksgiving, it's music flows. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
What a sweet declaration of appreciation. Melton |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sunny, this one is such a beautiful written tender show of tenderness and love. So well done with this one. Now to tuck it into my treasure box. Well done Sunny. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Ariana ~~~ Oh, thank you so much for the lovely wishes! Dreams still do come true! ~~~ RSW ~~~ Yes, it is song of thanksgiving! You are so right, and I thank you! ~~~ Melton ~~~ sometimes one just has to tell the world how they feel about their source of inspiration! Thank you! ~~~ Gentle Spirit ~~~ oh, I am so happy that you are keeping this one, as it really is a tribute of love...I thank you, my friend! The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
When a man gives a soft gentle touch he really appreciates the woman he is touching...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunnyone, Wonderful write, enjoyed the read. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Within your hands the magic of a sweet love song Has touched my heart while listening to you play You showed me it was meant for me to sing along And now I find I’m singing every day ------------------------ And yes......go on singing...we'd hear Such a nice lovely write..... Thank you ********************* "Oh...me!Oh Life! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
As the sun shines brightly on our northern songbirds, your golden voice sings along in a golden tribute to love and devotion. Way to go, girl! |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Sunnyone If your palms are as gentle and comforting as this pensive piece you've put together here, I would like to lay in your "Hands of Love" anyday. Excellent. Garfield |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
You know I love this one. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
very, very nice, romantic, too the title made it so I couldn't help but think of the hands of love trees students make and send to Mt. Sinai hospital in California at Christmas time for the terminally ill cancer and other diseased patients |
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