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2dalimit
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0 posted 2001-09-02 02:22 PM



Wonder why talk’s cheap
Supply’s greater than demand
Yak Yak Yak Yak Yak

Philosophical…
Loquaciously garrulous
Don’t get me started

© Copyright 2001 Melton Culberth - All Rights Reserved
MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2001-09-02 02:49 PM


Clever and concise -- I love the first two lines especially and the ending has a nice "back to one" loop to it...  Cool.

-MVS

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-MVS


Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-09-02 03:25 PM



Then I'll tiptoe right out...smiling all the way!

ethome
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3 posted 2001-09-02 03:27 PM


Heh heh I had to smile!   Enjoyable!
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-09-03 12:10 PM


2DaLimit~
LOL !  I like this~
Cool Senryu~
~*Marge*~

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Tracey
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5 posted 2001-09-03 12:38 PM


How true. Supply greater than demand. Brilliant

Tracey

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

jwesley
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6 posted 2001-09-03 12:44 PM


Yeah...gotta agree.  Those southern Texans always did have a way with words...hee, hee...just funnin' my friend.

jwesley (upper-southern)

SmittenKitten
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7 posted 2001-09-03 01:06 AM


hehehe    hilarious Melton!  Reminds me of that quote "Of those who say nothing, few are silent" ~Thomas Neill

Take care!
~Krista  

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And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

wayoutwalt
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8 posted 2001-09-03 01:11 AM


you hoo you hoo HEY!
it's so loud within my ears
squishy and vacant

don't mind that was just tryin to be funny like yours were

2dalimit
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9 posted 2001-09-03 10:47 AM


Mark, Glad you liked it.

sunshine, smiling- back at ya

et, thanks

Marge, ~Thank you~

Tracey, Yes, and They say I have a lot of supply.

jw, That ther be us southerners. Me jus has plenty to talk about.

Krista, I’m happy that you found it hilarious. Thanks.

Walt, I don’t mind you at all(funny, hee, hee). Thanks for replying.

Melton

vlraynes
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10 posted 2001-09-08 04:26 PM



2dalimit-
   LOL!!  Too funny!
   I'm liking this lots!

   Hugs,
   ~vicky



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



RosePetal
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11 posted 2001-09-08 06:18 PM


Haha..you got that right..the supply is way greater than the demand! : ) No wonder my cell bill is always sky high..hehehehe

<3 RosePetal

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