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RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

0 posted 2001-09-02 10:16 AM

Poor's the language expressing joy we've known
in fortuned moments spent in Love's embrace,
souls rest where former butterflies had flown
sharing their nectar bound to passion's grace.

Intertwining the beauty that they've seen
offerings from finest flowers given,
matters now where they are not where they've been
such convergence is our earthly heaven.

The furrowed brows of worry soon depart
as windblown clouds reveal dark's hopeful stars,
Love's pure canvas is painted with our art
as glowing Venus doth align with Mars.

Desire is thirst at first we tremble
but tranquilize in sweet kisses rainfall,
and soon clouds burst as our halves assemble
in a rapture known as bliss we enthrall.

For Love is light and the reason we are,
it's pleasured time outshines the darker pain,
unwritten unforgotten heart's memoir
warm to it's radiance while in it's reign.

Fate, Time, Occaision, Chance, and Change?
To these all things are subject but eternal Love.
-Shelley

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

1 posted 2001-09-02 10:30 AM

unwritten unforgotten hearts memoir

I think you've written it here. A beautiful write. (I seem to use that word "beautiful" a lot on this site. I hope it doesn't sound trite or overdone, but I just find so many beautiful thoughts expressed here by you all)

A fine piece

Tracey

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Lady Ollyne
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

2 posted 2001-09-02 10:39 AM

Lovely words, this morn

Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (edited 09-02-2001).]

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2001-09-02 11:24 AM

A beautiful blend of nature and romance.. lovely!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-09-02 11:31 AM

Poor's the language expressing joy we've known
in fortuned moments spent in Love's embrace,
souls rest where former butterflies had flown
sharing their nectar bound to passion's grace.
=============================
matters now where they are not where they've been
such convergence is our earthly heaven.

The furrowed brows of worry soon depart
as windblown clouds reveal dark's hopeful stars,
Love's pure canvas is painted with our art
as glowing Venus doth align with Mars.

Desire is thirst at first we tremble
but tranquilize in sweet kisses rainfall,
===================================
For Love is light and the reason we are,
it's pleasured time outshines the darker pain,
unwritten unforgotten heart's memoir
warm to it's radiance while in it's reign.
====================================

OH MY!!! Richard this is SUPERB Poetry.
What a high level of inspire this beauty is...
the imagery, the language & vocab,the cadence, the poetic phrasing, the romantic-bittersweet intend...
ya had me from the butterfly verse *S*
this is poetry in motion and the only thing left to say is..
I wish I had wrote this...
(and its a keeper to be read many times)
wonderful writing Richard.

A man who asks a woman to lie for him, is a man who will lie to that woman.
A woman who lies for a man, is a woman who lies to herself.
(vise versa)

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-09-02 01:11 PM

Wow - Richard, this is amazing, and so beautiful! I love it, into my library this goes~

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2001-09-02 01:29 PM

Excellent write....enjoyed it very much!

Charisma

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-09-02 03:55 PM

Breathtakingly Beautiful.....

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2001-09-02 03:57 PM

Quite beautiful...thank you!

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2001-09-02 08:42 PM

Desire is thirst at first we tremble
but tranquilize in sweet kisses rainfall,
and soon clouds burst as our halves assemble
in a rapture known as bliss we enthrall.

As i was reading..i heard raindrops on the skylight..quite appropriate..nicely done

~Victoria~

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

10 posted 2001-09-02 09:02 PM

I like this. good read,sir. enjoyed it
alan

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

11 posted 2001-09-02 10:17 PM

This was so wonderfully written and goes to show the power of love which transcends time. I firmly believe this. Take care...Sue

Suetang

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

12 posted 2001-09-05 06:44 PM

'The furrowed brows of worry soon depart
as windblown clouds reveal dark's hopeful stars,
Love's pure canvas is painted with our art
as glowing Venus doth align with Mars.

Desire is thirst at first we tremble
but tranquilize in sweet kisses rainfall,
and soon clouds burst as our halves assemble
in a rapture known as bliss we enthrall.'

Breathtaking lines, Richard...the images here are just amazing...wonderful write! I love it!

sp

tried to write a letter
to tell you how I feel,
but all I kept on writing
was slipping on the tears from the day...

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

13 posted 2001-09-05 06:50 PM

Very Very well written!!!!
Thanks for sharing....
~Connie~

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

14 posted 2002-01-24 12:36 PM

Both your poetry and your presence are missed here poet sir...
just wanted to let you know ...
and read this gem again

I'm like a broken record that you can play ...
Repeating (as if it matters) ... everything I say.

Gin Blossoms

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