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The Tap of My Cane
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The Tap of My Cane |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Tap of My cane Layers of my mind in flow Are the quick sands of my sew Silver pools of shining light That sucks me down into the night. Moments of my ghostly past That never ever really last That drains the nectar of my soul And blinds me to my very goal. They lay the road before my walk They curse my tongue with phantoms talk They never clear the mist away Or point to me the right of way. They screen the path of paradox Make my eyes see golden docks Fill my ears with mystic chime Eat the moments of my time I feel the darkness fill my mind And scream to heaven I am blind. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
in violate my senses lost gold shall never know the cost of my sight, my sound, my hear the dark to bear all new fear I feel this one Sy....well done Sir... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Moments of my ghostly past And scream to heaven I am blind Yes, what a haunting picture you paint for us. I really feel this. What a beautiful way to start my day this morning. Thank you Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Layers of my mind in flow Are the quick sands of my sew Silver pools of shining light That sucks me down into the night. Moments of my ghostly past That never ever really last ===================================== They lay the road before my walk They curse my tongue with phantoms talk ================================ They screen the path of paradox Make my eyes see golden docks Fill my ears with mystic chime Eat the moments of my time I feel the darkness fill my mind And scream to heaven I am blind. ===================================== While I both understand and am touched by the dark depth of the intend of this... I just have to smile at you my sweet poet of cool ... for you, who daily writes with so much wisdom and vision to write of being blind .. NOW THERES the Paradox!!! there are some really awesome phrases and images in this dark beauty Sy-babes.... Layers of my mind in flow Are the quick sands of my sew Silver pools of shining light That sucks me down into the night. They lay the road before my walk They curse my tongue with phantoms talk Fill my ears with mystic chime Eat the moments of my time Now how much cooler can you be ... you just painted with your words...a scream we can hear across the miles of these pages. Save the cane for rapping Randy when hes too dandy...cuz you see just fine  *winkiewinkie*  me A man who asks a woman to lie for him, is a man who will lie to that woman. |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
To tap the layers, mind of mine to reach and pool thine silver thoughts enriching nightfall, in it's glow 'tis mine, 'tis thee, thine words be caught. Blinded by thy morning words Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I see your cane as Maestro's baton Tapping out rhyme until it's done~ Perfect meter in your song *Applause* dear Maestro for taking me along~ You rock ! !  Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--You see better then most, for you don't look with your eyes but your heart. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You have the gift of seeing with your heart Sey. Beautiful words. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You outshine the night. *L* Tracey, You welcome and thank you for the read. JM, You always press the right button.Love ya Marge, You are the whipped cream on my jello. *L* Sy Martie, Thank you my wild flower. Gentle, Thank you for the beautiful. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful conception of the world of the blind. I like the parallels within....super write my dear friend! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethome, Super comments my friend. |
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