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Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

0 posted 2001-09-01 08:17 PM

                        Take My Hand

Come, give me your hand.
   We can fly, swim or walk hand
         in hand over this land.

Be my friend, my soulmate, my love.
    Dream with me, and we will fantasize
          about the clouds above.
Come with me on the highway of life,
      a wonderful trip - a mysterious pattern of
           happiness, sorrow, peace and strife.

I will be right there with you
       I will never leave your side.
           I will never cheat or lie
               and forever promise to comply.

I extend my heart to you.
           Just reach out –
               hold on tight and dream with me.

         Come, take my hand.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

1 posted 2001-09-01 08:37 PM

How lovely. May we all find a soulmate like that to hold our hand through this journey called life.

Tracey

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

2 posted 2001-09-01 08:38 PM

nice invite, sweet promises...very good read.
alan

The Lonely Stranger
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA

3 posted 2001-09-01 08:46 PM

"I extend my heart to you.
Just reach out –
hold on tight and dream with me.

Come, take my hand."

In the words of Aurthur Bach ... "That would leave you with one!"

Sorry, I couldn't resist

No one ever listened themselves into trouble.

[This message has been edited by The Lonely Stranger (edited 09-01-2001).]

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2001-09-02 02:56 PM

Lovely one.....absolutely lovely!! And when one finds their hand in the hand of their soulmate, there is ultimate joy!! I loved this, Ariana......

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2001-09-02 03:37 PM

Very romantic poetry...I love this invitation!...

                    "Be my friend, my soulmate, my love.
                     Dream with me, and we will fantasize
                           about the clouds above.
                 Come with me on the highway of life,
                       a wonderful trip - a mysterious pattern of
                            happiness, sorrow, peace and strife."

Warm and loving poetry!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-09-02 03:59 PM

Ariana, a lovely photo, a pretty poem...well done!

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

7 posted 2001-09-02 07:56 PM

Tracey:  My soulmate is out there, I know he is.  And, yes, it is nice to have someone to hold on to.  Thank you for coming by and I appreciate your comments.

Alan:  Thanks for your comments. I am glad that you liked it.

The Lonely Stranger:  Alone or not - I enjoyed writing it.  Thanks for coming by.

Sunny:  Thank you for being so positive and keeping my spirits up and keeping me on track.  You are such a good friend.

ethome:  Thank you for stopping by and accepting my invitation to dream with me.

Sunshine:  Thanks for the compliment on the photo and I am glad that liked the poem too.  I appreciate your comments.

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