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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2001-09-01 05:25 PM



{dedicated to William DeVore, my friend}

Will, you
become a man
as beautiful as
the boy spirit
possessing you now
threading through
veins of gold upon silver
chiming a soft melody
with every beat of your
tender heart

Will, you
continue to be
a kind, gentle soul
though I know you
protest in adorable
humility, to be less
yet this heart sees so
much more in
you,
Will,
remain special
loved unconditionally
not only by me, but any
discerning, blessed
enough, to see
you, Will...

Believe...
~Tier
3/00

© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
1 posted 2001-09-01 05:41 PM


Oh WOW is that true love that's speaking here?

It's beautiful Tiersdin

Titia

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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2001-09-01 06:42 PM


Loved it my friend.


jwesley

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

3 posted 2001-09-02 12:35 PM


What a nice poem to write for a friend.
Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

4 posted 2001-09-02 12:45 PM


And such a tender, personal touch you have.  Nicely done.
Wes Utica
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since 2000-08-12
Posts 28
California
5 posted 2001-09-02 06:16 PM


Will must be special. How lucky to have a friend like you who can express how dear he is.
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
6 posted 2001-09-02 06:48 PM


Will must be a very special guy. This is a wonderful tribute to his fine qualities!
Sven
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7 posted 2001-09-03 03:38 PM


well done my friend. . . great job. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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