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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2001-09-01 05:21 PM


Protective

Wary

Lest
The mainstream
Fade


My reality


(Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON)

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


© Copyright 2001 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
VAS
Member Rara Avis
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Oregon
1 posted 2001-09-01 07:56 PM


Wow! I don't understand this one at all, but it sounds ominous.
Zinsser
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Calif.
2 posted 2001-09-01 08:01 PM


This one is good....

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-09-01 09:11 PM


I like this..and I do believe I am starting to understand them, right Mark?  

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2001-09-01 09:18 PM


Hm, interesting, can you explain it further? I think I have it, but not sure.
S

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
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In a corporeal internship...
5 posted 2001-09-01 10:21 PM


Virginia and Sandra,  I'm picturing simply this:  I'm guarded so as not to lose my identity/individuality to "the flow"/peer pressure/society/insecurities/Fear/deception...

Thanks, Connie...

Enchantress, thank you, but you tell me -- are you starting to "understand" them?  (Hint:  there is no "one correct answer" -- only subjective impressions and interpretations...  that's what makes writing these and reading everyone's responses so much fun!)

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS


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