»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #15
»
Night, dear
| Open Poetry #15 |
|
Night, dear |
|
|
Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You’re singing along with country songs time for me to go to bed nothing good can come of this. Soon you’ll be asking me who I’m sleeping with in the travel car of a lonely train the same one that ran over your dog and grandmother. Night, dear We’ll talk in the morning. I promise. |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Duncan - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Duncan, the same train that ran over your dog and grandmother? Now that is a picture to behold. Good writing, ME |
||
|
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Duncan you've got to find a way to keep the old lady from drinking so much...God was the grandmother drunk too? Not the dog ..no way! Sometimes the morning is the best time to talk...smile! Sang with twang.... "If you loved me half as much as I love you You wouldn't worry me half as much as you do. You're nice to me when no one else' around you only build me up just to let me down....." heh heh no wonder you went to bed! |
||
|
Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
So few words, but so interestingly put. I really like this Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
||
|
RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Not an harmonious evening I take it? Not in sync? Got a chuckle, thanks. |
||
|
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Get ready set......attack. At least you are worn of what's coming next. Very funny at least grandma didn't get run over by a reindeer.  |
||
|
Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*chuckles* cute! ~Tier |
||
|
A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Hello Duncan, I feel terrible about not having welcomed you earlier, but I must say being a new resident in the state of Texas, I give y'all a great big howdy. This was great and allowed me to laugh till I cried. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
||
|
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
LOL...but if the song fits...twang it...LOL...helen |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
