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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-08-31 06:10 PM





Sunset


Red levels
Embrace silhouettes
Last sun shades

Warm twilight
Solace reflection
Depth of lake



Charisma
~*TMP*~
31/08/01


© Copyright 2001 Theresia A. Makatita-Poortman - All Rights Reserved
Tiersdin
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1 posted 2001-08-31 06:17 PM


peaceful and lovely!

~Tier


Alan
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2 posted 2001-08-31 07:12 PM


I love the picture and the poem. Both are beautiful.
alan

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3 posted 2001-08-31 10:23 PM


Charisma~
AGAIN ... you have treated us to such lovely Haiku~
I really like the deviation of the syllabic count in these.
Most acceptable 3-5-3 and most effectively done~

Go gal GO ~
Love you and your poetry~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Charisma
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4 posted 2001-09-01 03:08 PM


Tiersdin: Thank you  

Alan: thank you, glad that you like it  

Marge: thank you for your always kind support, and I like these 3-5-3 haikus too.

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5 posted 2001-09-04 07:10 PM


ahhh. . .this is perfect for the time right now. . .

wonderfully done my friend. . .

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Titia Geertman
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6 posted 2001-09-04 07:48 PM


Charisma, this is just beautiful, words and picture  

Titia

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Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

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7 posted 2001-09-04 07:56 PM


a picture worth a thousnad words?  you said it beautifully and had 985 left over.

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

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8 posted 2001-09-04 09:56 PM



Wonderful images here, Charisma!  

I, too, enjoyed the 3-5-3 format!~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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