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stable mind
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stable mind |
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staybellmined Junior Member
since 2001-07-29
Posts 21insanity, usa (killeen,tx) |
Sometimes there a shadow in my head Totally convinced I'm someone else instead A passage way to another time Beyond the sun, without a rhyme Lost in a never ending spiral of my disease Empty of anyone I've ever wanted to please Maybe I never was who I thought to be Insanity runs deep in my family No one to love and few who care Deeply into nothing I often stare Created by the turbulence of the world today Rehashed and remashed with nothing new to say A faded shadow of thoughs and dreams Some with love, and most with screams Here on the downside I fall once more Every time I try to leave through the door Stopped by the whispers of things unsure |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I like this very much... post more, please... *smiles* ~Tier |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Very intense, thought provoking. Written from a mind in a whirl it seemed. I enjoyed it very much. Went back and read some of your others. Great writing Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
On the outside many appear stable, only a professional would know, I suppose, but then who speaks to them? Somebody has to encourage the 12 years of school that pushes them to edges of pits that no one wants to tread. I think your poem lifts the veil of our own servitude. Our inner self. Very well done. Sincerely, Regina |
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