Portrait Of Emotions (summer's soon gone)

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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

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0 posted 2001-08-31 10:26 AM

Portrait Of Emotions
~*~

Alas, my love is a portrait of emotions
set to the music of imagination
will it vanish with the summer rose?
I'll live each season as it passes
surrounded by a vast ocean of hope
embroidered by the poetry of dreams
which must be entered
I do not carry the winds of all knowing
in my hands
for the sun is set, summer's soon gone
still, I'll breathe the fresh air
in the kaleidoscope of change
and dream on
~*~

BloomingRose

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

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1 posted 2001-08-31 10:34 AM

Summer lives in our hearts....were hope resides....

this is very nice!

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

2 posted 2001-08-31 12:42 PM

"still, I'll breathe the fresh air
in the kaleidoscope of change
and dream on"

Wonderful sentiments!

Love the optimistic attitude.

Great write,
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 08-31-2001).]

BloomingRose
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3 posted 2001-08-31 03:10 PM

Thank you much!

Deb

rwood
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Tennessee

4 posted 2001-09-01 09:09 AM

You just painted a year round Blooming Rose. One whose petals so soft yet withstanding all winds of change.

Sincerely,
Regina

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-09-02 10:58 PM

Im playing catch up tonite...havent been able to keep up of late....
this is lovely Deb...
the imagery and the poetic phrasing as well as the vocab and flow...
well done poetess of the Rose

jm

A man who asks a woman to lie for him, is a man who will lie to that woman.
A woman who lies for a man, is a woman who lies to herself.
(vise versa)

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-09-02 11:14 PM

BloomingRose~
And I'm glad JanetMarie's playing catch up !

This is a beautiful piece of writing.
You are so talented in presenting your thoughts so delicately~
Thank you for sharing~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

BloomingRose
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Florida

7 posted 2001-09-03 09:32 AM

Regina, Marge, & Janet~ Thank you so much for reading.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2001-09-08 04:21 PM

Deb-
   This is a gorgeous write.
   I really enjoyed the lovely thoughts
   you've penned here.

   Hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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lost in blue pages

9 posted 2001-09-08 05:08 PM

for the sun is set, summer's soon gone
still, I'll breathe the fresh air
in the kaleidoscope of change
and dream on

*sigh*.....beautiful....fills me with melancholy

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