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Hollowman
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since 2001-06-01
Posts 117


0 posted 2001-08-30 05:33 PM



My love compare me to a tornado of bliss at sea
for in between my storms,
lies a love I hold for thee
Yes blustery thoughts you witness
and jet streams of passions we hold
for in my cellular make up
are memories, memories of old.

My torrents of energy abound
my convictions of words so profound
Let me rest your body, softly upon the ground
No fear to touch our world
just inner thoughts of you and me
let me show you the way
the way life can be

I donate my heart most freely
to you I truly give
From you I draw this energy
the one makes me live

Dismiss my heart and feelings
for you i'd truly die
I will endure this storm of attrition
as the hawk circles the sky

Remeber my face at sunset
recall my touch at dawn
feel the emotion of my love
a love that you have worn....

Richy

© Copyright 2001 Richard Pardoe - All Rights Reserved
ShannonM
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since 2001-07-28
Posts 104
Drifitng
1 posted 2001-08-30 05:34 PM


I really like this.  It's very sweet.

ShannonM

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
2 posted 2001-08-30 05:49 PM


lovely Words, Richy...

*smiles*

~Tier

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