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Sven
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0 posted 2001-08-30 04:17 PM


for the love of days
I give you my nights
lost along the ways
with the stars as sights

for the rising sun
I give you my moon
you, the only one
who sings my love’s tune

for the song of dove
I give you my lark
now that I have love
I won’t have the dark

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Charisma
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1 posted 2001-08-30 04:35 PM


*sigh*....beautiful!!!!!!

excellent as always my friend.

Charisma

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2 posted 2001-08-30 04:56 PM


Wonderful....just as all your writings are!
Enjoyed....Nancy.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2001-08-30 06:03 PM


Sven,

  Short and very very sweet.. *sigh* You always know the right words.



TaraB

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4 posted 2001-08-30 06:12 PM


Wonderfully romantic, Sven

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

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5 posted 2001-08-30 06:51 PM


Enjoyed your poem Sven...James
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6 posted 2001-08-30 07:11 PM


enjoy
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7 posted 2001-08-30 08:23 PM


Mmm, beautiful words of love. Very special.
Sandra

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8 posted 2001-08-30 10:34 PM


Charisma, thank you my friend, glad that you enjoyed. . .

Enchantress, thank you for reading and enjoying. . .  

rp, well maybe not always the right words. . . but thank you. . .

Shadow, thank you. . .I'm getting back to being that. . .

James, enjoyed your reply my friend. . .  

vandana, alawys good to see you my friend. . . thank you. . .

Sandra, it's what I've been told I do best. . . thank you. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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9 posted 2001-08-31 04:17 AM


a true romantic
MyEnchanted_Melody
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10 posted 2001-08-31 10:29 AM




And for the love of your words
here...I'd stay
To read the words....the love
the feelings
you give away


Lovely...& so beautifully romantic Sven......
I can't help but picture candle lights and music as I read this....

This should go to my library....


Thank you
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"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

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11 posted 2001-09-01 10:26 AM


Sven,
This is soo pretty, passionate and romantic, and reads so well too...like a little song.  Janette

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12 posted 2001-09-03 03:46 PM


Passing Shadows, a Romantic yes. . . a "true" one. . . well. . . thank you. . .

Enchanted Melody, thank you so much my friend. . . you honor me with your words. . .  

Janette, thank you. . . now if there was only someone to sing it to. . .

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13 posted 2001-09-04 07:43 PM


John,

Days and nights?  They don't matter as long as you have love.  Great write!  I enjoyed it!

Laura

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14 posted 2001-09-04 08:00 PM


*S* good one Sven

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

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15 posted 2001-09-04 09:06 PM


Now that I have love
I won't have the dark

I love that. Beaufiful thoughts here

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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16 posted 2001-09-05 05:36 PM


You elicit sighs, even from the fellas.  Another gem from the gr8 voice of the Northland
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17 posted 2001-09-05 07:11 PM


Laura, you're right. . .  . . . thank you. . . good to see you!!!

Rusty Knight, thank you for reading my friend. . .

Tracey, thank you so much. . . your words are appreciated. . .

Interloper, oh great voice of the Southland. . . when you're talking about love. . . everyone sighs. . .   thank you my friend. . .

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18 posted 2001-09-06 08:19 AM



May you have many, many days that lead to splendiforous nights....

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