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Charisma
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lost in blue pages

0 posted 2001-08-30 03:00 PM






aristocratic
balmy gleam of last sunbeams
divine performance
rocks upon emerald stream
pacific meditation



Charisma
~*TMP*~
30/08/01


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perfectionist you
setting we on tales of light
wishing for twilight

VAS
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2 posted 2001-08-30 03:23 PM


oh my the beauty
rolls, crashes, washes the shore
everlasting might

*********

your talent and your pic are highly inspirational!

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-08-30 03:32 PM


Charisma~

~No one does it just
as perfectly as you do
You touch the Tanka
in word-waves overflowing
Rolling gently to the page~


*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2001-08-30 06:47 PM


Chsrisma,
A soft beautiful write.

Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2001-08-30 07:50 PM




late evening sun
shining on wrinkled surface
little sparkles glow



Beautiful tanka Charisma

Titia


A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 08-30-2001).]

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6 posted 2001-08-30 09:59 PM


CharismaSweetie, bearhugz2uPoetFriend for sharing with us your perfect touch that you possess in writing wonderful tankas...

*~coco~*

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