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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-08-30 02:39 PM


You softly sang to me as we danced
warming my soul and touching my heart,
a moonlight night so full of romance
tender kisses, to sadly depart.

As I was slowly driving away
inside I could not help but to smile,
we'll be together again someday
although it might take a little while.

I pray these memories to hold me
softly spoken words will help me through,
'til in your arms again I can be
I will hold cherished thoughts of you.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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1 posted 2001-08-30 02:54 PM



With thoughts like this, those cherished memories will come easily...

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2001-08-30 02:57 PM


Thank you lady.  I struggled with this one a bit, just can't seem to quite get it right.
The memories.........*s*  wonderful.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Charisma
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3 posted 2001-08-30 03:15 PM


Lovely and tender piece....cherished thoughts, treasured with love.

Love it!
Charisma

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4 posted 2001-08-31 12:38 PM


GentleSpirit~
Quite a lovely, romantic read~
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2001-09-02 09:06 PM


I enjoyed the one you had on the front page so much I started looking up past post...I was not disappointed.  Very romantic and real

Death comes not when we cease to breath, but when we cease to dream.

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2001-09-03 11:31 AM


Just a quick pop in to say Thanks and I appreciate ya'll very much.  Hugs

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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