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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-08-30 01:49 PM



cannonball’s landing
honesty paid heavy price
when you took Hope home


in your slip of lip
you let loose all that you gripped
in clinging to Hope


people come and go
yet if I come across Hope
I will think of you


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1 posted 2001-08-30 02:03 PM


Lady--It seems Hope has many faces.
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2 posted 2001-08-30 02:13 PM


Hope has a light shining on it, called Faith, and beside it standing tall are friends with outreached hands, called Charity, and in their hand they hold Love!  With these, all things of despair seem lighter.  I stand in the crowd of friends  

~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~
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3 posted 2001-08-30 02:41 PM


Quietly enjoyed....
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4 posted 2001-08-30 02:43 PM


Indeed the many faces of Hope, and one must remember.......besides hope does indeed stand faith, love, and charity.  Wonderful write.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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5 posted 2001-08-30 03:37 PM


LadyInWhite~

'people come and go
yet if I come across Hope
I will think of you'


I sensed a little loss here~
May you 'come across Hope' often~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-08-30 04:14 PM


First hurt, but you didn't lost your Hope.
May you often across Hope.

Charisma

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