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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-08-30 08:16 AM




Academia
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Manipulated


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2001-08-30 08:18 AM


I don't know much about this style of writing but I do know that the message within is true! Sometimes just to sell books to brag about themselves...huum.... Very good!
Rick
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2 posted 2001-08-30 08:40 AM


Dear Sunshine, I don't really understand what you are doing here, is it like,

Waking
Working
Resting
??????

What are we trying to offer with three words?

Rick

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3 posted 2001-08-30 08:40 AM


clever... very clever..bravo!
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4 posted 2001-08-30 11:30 AM


Karilea~
You clever little rascal you ! !
Big smiles here ~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2001-08-30 11:40 AM


pretty smart...helen
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6 posted 2001-08-30 02:03 PM



Very clever and creative sunshiny one  
Well done!~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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7 posted 2001-08-30 02:15 PM


You said a mouthful, and I know this manipulation of the mind!  Extremely well thought out, and sometimes less is more and this would be one of those times.

~*If you can't say anything nice about someone, don't say anything at all*~
My Gramma, Mom and now now me

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