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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-08-30 07:43 AM


Fly With Me

I would a lighted candle be
To keep the dark away from thee
To light a light above thy head
To shed the darkness and the dread

To place a smile upon thy lips
To sooth thee with my finger tips
To whisper pleasures to thy mind
To stroke thee with the kindest kind

I’d love to take thee heaven bound
To hear the harps and heavens sound
To feel the freedom of the dare
To flap your wings and feel the air

I would with thee in happy soar
To fly with thee above this awe
Drink and sip of flowers nectar
Rule within this wonders sector.

So spread your wings and fly with me
Into my world of fantasy


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-08-30 08:19 AM



ethome
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2 posted 2001-08-30 08:24 AM


               "I’d love to take thee heaven bound
                To hear the harps and heavens sound
                To feel the freedom of the dare
                To flap your wings and feel the air"

Seymour if you're going to do this then you'll have to be a good boy.......tsk tsk...... I don't know, they say the ladies love a rogue! Gosh, not that I'm implying anything!   Hummm!   Good poem!!

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2001-08-30 09:01 AM


I would a lighted candle be
To keep the dark away from thee
To light a light above thy head
To shed the darkness and the dread

To place a smile upon thy lips
To sooth thee with my finger tips
To whisper pleasures to thy mind
To stroke thee with the kindest kind

I’d love to take thee heaven bound
To hear the harps and heavens sound
To feel the freedom of the dare
To flap your wings and feel the air
===================================
So spread your wings and fly with me
Into my world of fantasy
===================================


OH MY!!! OH *SIGH* ... OH SY!!
Have mercy.....this moth just flew into the flame head on  
Lordy ... send me down me wings.....
(OHHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS)

DIP THOSE WINGS BABY  

seriously...this is SOOOOOO beautiful Sy...
love the language and romantic intend.
this is a treasure chest keeper!!
me

"oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive"

~Sarah McLachlan~

Dee
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4 posted 2001-08-30 09:49 AM


Seymour, I love the olde world language you have used. Really adds to the fantasy world.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-08-30 09:53 AM


Sunshine,
Your more then a candle, your my sunshine. *L*

Ethome,
Didn't you know, I fly on the back of my Randy dragon. LOL

JM,
(OHHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS
Randy is blowing fire and smoke.
For he and I there is no hope.
Winkiewinkie Stinky

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2001-08-30 09:56 AM


Dee,
We crossed in response. Not star crossed, but thank you much.

Titia Geertman
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7 posted 2001-08-30 04:48 PM


How come I'm always touched by your poems?

'Cause you write so beautiful!!!!


So spread your wings and fly with me into my world of fantasy

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Charisma
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8 posted 2001-08-30 05:04 PM


Geesh... where have I left my wings, I must find them 'cause I wanna fly with you!!


Beautiful!!!!! yep I am swooning now.

Charisma

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
9 posted 2001-08-30 06:22 PM


Titia,
Beautiful comment, thank you.

Sweet Charisma,
I am sure they are in the closet. *L*

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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10 posted 2001-08-30 06:45 PM




I got my wings and Im ready to fly
Im back to read this poem that made me high ...
For I do so love to *swoon* and *sigh*
Lets fly to that fantasy in the sky ...
To believe you need only look into my eyes
See your reflection in the tears I cry
Lets take wing and fly ... we wont know if we dont try


*winkiewinkie*
me

"oh you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
my body aches to breathe your breath
your words keep me alive"

~Sarah McLachlan~

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2001-08-30 06:52 PM


Good writing Seymour...James
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2001-08-30 06:57 PM


Dear Tinkerbell,
When I openned this and Randy saw your picture, he went into a dead faint. I'm still trying to revive him. When I do I'm sure he'll put the double saddle on pick you up and take us to raspberry fantasy land.
Love ya Sy

shadow974
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 636
Michigan
13 posted 2001-08-30 06:58 PM


Nicely done.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
14 posted 2001-08-30 06:59 PM


James,
We crossed when I was answering JM. Thank you for the read.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
15 posted 2001-08-30 07:00 PM


Shadow,
Thank you for the nicely.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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16 posted 2002-02-02 01:17 PM


BIG BIG OLE *SIGH*  
chimes chinging too *L*

     

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